I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
You're hotel looks great! I like how spacious you've made it. Can you tell me about it? Where would you build it? What would you build it out of? Does it have any special features? I'd love to know more.
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MÅrena Unique,
ReplyDeleteYou're hotel looks great! I like how spacious you've made it. Can you tell me about it? Where would you build it? What would you build it out of? Does it have any special features? I'd love to know more.
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Mikey :)
Hi Unique, I like your hotel room. It is really easy to see what things are. On mine my hotel floor is made of trampolines. Have a look at my blog.
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