I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Unique , I love this post of yours. What led you to wan to do this ? I love how you added in so many things that people will need but may not be able to afford like plasters and woollen hats .
Your personality is just like your name. I'm really amused by all the work that you have done. I am looking forward to your next helpful adventure! Once again, Awesome work!
Hi Unique it is your friend Lacie here I think that the homeless would of really thought that unique of you. Did you give them anything else? How long did it take you to put all of the bags together? Also this slide is very long so good job. Blog you later.
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Hi Unique ,
ReplyDeleteI love this post of yours. What led you to wan to do this ? I love how you added in so many things that people will need but may not be able to afford like plasters and woollen hats .
Hi Unique!
ReplyDeleteYour personality is just like your name. I'm really amused by all the work that you have done. I am looking forward to your next helpful adventure! Once again, Awesome work!
Hi Unique it is your friend Lacie here I think that the homeless would of really thought that unique of you. Did you give them anything else? How long did it take you to put all of the bags together? Also this slide is very long so good job. Blog you later.
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