I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Unique, Nirvana here I really like your post it is high value, I really like how you added the photo of Boof And LB. (They look like they are have fun). Maybe next you could put your writing at the top of your post. In your other post maybe use a heading.
Hey Unique, I agree with you dogs are my favourite animal too! I ended up doing a slide show about ten reasons you should get a dog! What do you think your favourite breed of dog is? Mine is a Golden Retriever just like Cooper! I also really like that Nirvana has left you a comment! Her advice is good. Keep up the good work! - Miss M
Kia Ora Unique it is Lacie here from Gilberthorpe School; I really like the picture of your animals they are adorable. Remember to check your punctation. My favourite animal is probably a panda or a dog or cat. Do you have any other pets? DO you enjoy doing the learning journey?
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Hey Unique, Nirvana here
ReplyDeleteI really like your post it is high value, I really like how you added the photo of Boof And LB. (They look like they are have fun). Maybe next you could put your writing at the top of your post. In your other post maybe use a heading.
That is all great work Unique
Bye Blog you later
Hey Unique,
ReplyDeleteI agree with you dogs are my favourite animal too! I ended up doing a slide show about ten reasons you should get a dog!
What do you think your favourite breed of dog is? Mine is a Golden Retriever just like Cooper!
I also really like that Nirvana has left you a comment! Her advice is good.
Keep up the good work!
- Miss M
Kia Ora Unique it is Lacie here from Gilberthorpe School;
ReplyDeleteI really like the picture of your animals they are adorable. Remember to check your punctation. My favourite animal is probably a panda or a dog or cat. Do you have any other pets? DO you enjoy doing the learning journey?