I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
It's Mrs Pam here, Unique. I like how you have used colour to describe the sky. You are right, the sky at night can be purple sometimes. What is the colour when it rains?
Hi Unique it is Nirvana here i love that you said the sky can be purple and you mix it together and it makes a rainbow and for a career little sister it is amazing hope to see more soon bye.
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Hi Unique it's me Elham.
ReplyDeleteI love your poem and the picture that you put.
I wonder if you can put a picture of yourself next to the rainbow picture.
It's Mrs Pam here, Unique. I like how you have used colour to describe the sky. You are right, the sky at night can be purple sometimes. What is the colour when it rains?
ReplyDeleteYou have a gift for writing . Keep going and enjoy what youy are doing. I am sure other people like your work. Keep learning and sharing.
ReplyDeleteHi Unique it is Nirvana here i love that you said the sky can be purple and you mix it together and it makes a rainbow and for a career little sister it is amazing hope to see more soon bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Unique you did a great job on your Sky poem I like the way that you put on the image.
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