I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Unique it is Me Lacie from your class good job on this but maybe next time put more things about scott so that you put a picture in there head. Also next time you should add what was your favourite part of the assemberley. blog You later
Kia ora Unique, Zoey here from Rimu. I love your slide because it looks like you took the time to videos of him reading the books. Maybe next time you could write a bit more and be a bit more descriptive. I wonder if Scott Tulloch enjoyed being at our school. BLOG U LATER!
Hey Unique Sita here... It looks like you had a lot of fun with Scott Talach! I like how you added in the story that he showed us first and also put a link to go and watch him read it. I also like what you like about him and how you found him funny when he came. Maybe next time you could add a ilttle more infomation with what happened so we can picture more of an idea of what he did to those who have not seen or met him. Also your post are pretty good so you should post a little more often. Anyway I have a question... what was your favorite part of him coming? Thats all for now bye!
Hi Unique, Tobey here. This is really cool, but it's a bit out of date so remember to update your blog and make sure you have full stops at the end of a sentence. BYE!
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ReplyDeleteHi Unique it is Me Lacie from your class good job on this but maybe next time put more things about scott so that you put a picture in there head. Also next time you should add what was your favourite part of the assemberley. blog You later
ReplyDeleteKia ora Unique, Zoey here from Rimu.
ReplyDeleteI love your slide because it looks like you took the time to videos of him reading the books.
Maybe next time you could write a bit more and be a bit more descriptive.
I wonder if Scott Tulloch enjoyed being at our school.
BLOG U LATER!
Hey Unique Sita here...
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you had a lot of fun with Scott Talach!
I like how you added in the story that he showed us first and also put a link to go and watch him read it.
I also like what you like about him and how you found him funny when he came.
Maybe next time you could add a ilttle more infomation with what happened so we can picture more of an idea of what he did to those who have not seen or met him.
Also your post are pretty good so you should post a little more often.
Anyway I have a question... what was your favorite part of him coming?
Thats all for now bye!
Hi Unique, Tobey here.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool, but it's a bit out of date so remember to update your blog and make sure you have full stops at the end of a sentence.
BYE!
Hey Unique it's been ages sense you've posted a blog post.
ReplyDeleteso I hope you read this because you not posted sense 15 september.