I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Unique I think your post is cool. It reminds me of my mission to mars. Maybe next time you could make the lines darker because I can't really see . Why did you make your drawing so small? Blog you later Aliyah
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Hi Unique
ReplyDeleteI think your post is cool. It reminds me of my mission to mars. Maybe next time you could make the lines darker because I can't really see . Why did you make your drawing so small?
Blog you later
Aliyah