I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Cool Unique! I love Gemeve's hair and her eyes, great detail in there! Try to write a bit more about Gemeve next time.. what is her personality like??
ReplyDeleteWow! you have done so good on your work I love the way you put in her hair :D
ReplyDeleteHay!!Unique great job I love the way her hair is. from Kirsty
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