I am a student at South Hornby Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
last week we had to taste an pudding and describe what it looked like smelt like taste like feels like this is my work. - what I felt easy was writing . what I felt hard was editing.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
hi unique i loved you're word you did and and how did you think about that word and thanks for shareing you're work good job
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